We went to camping on beach last weekend at east of shenzhen. We drived with many net-friend, arrived at there about at four p.m.
Look for a flatness, we camped on the beach. Then I took my sons go swimming. I'm a skilled swimmer, I can swimed to the net defence shark. There are many swimmers near the beach, so the seawater is not clear. But if you swim far, the seawater is clear ane deep blue.
We played several times, the black clouds coming slowly, the sky beginning to dark. My sons played on the sands, I did my best swimming to bank & took kids to wash at once. When we went out from wash-room, a storm coming.
It seemed the storm don't want to stop, we had to drive out for our dinner in rain. We came to shuitou after ten minutes. There were many tourists at each restaurant. We parked outside the street and went to a throng restaurant. Wait a long time, the servers just find the place for us. It seemed everyone as hungry as a hunter, or the seafood is very tasty, each full plate came empty quickly. We were satiated little by little, the rain stoped bit by bit.
Come bakc to beach camped, there were some rain-water droped in tent. I almost wanted to go home at then. Two kids made tunnels on sands, they looks happily & proudly for their achievement. I'm so tired after wipped off the water in tent. Attended upon kids sleeping, the sounds of killed game let me in active. I joined to play with them. It was two o'clock when we go sleeping. Although it was midnight, someones still talked till daylight.
The second day was fine and sunny. You know sunlight on the sea is forceful to hurt skin, so I didn't dare to swim in sunshine. Some of us had a rest under trees. Of course nothing can prevent the boys play in sea. Mr. Karmo & Echo went to sea by their boat. After several minutes, they took some qingkou from sea. Mr. Zijue boiled qingkou for us to eat, they tasted vrey fresh.
We drived to wutong mountain for our dinner after packed up the dent. The merchant hadn't prepare for the visitor, so we wait a long time again. Someone played cards or majiang, the others had a rest, the kids played game together. At last, the dinner were ready, all of us sat around the table looking forward to the cate.
The blue sky got to dark slowly, street lamps were lighted one by one, a happily weekend had been over too.
石头河
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2005-09-14 03:38
I want somenoe help me to find the problem in text. For example, chinese english, grammar, etc. because I want to improving my english.
石头河
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2005-10-09 07:25
thank u very much.
my second hikework followed again
pls waiting
It's a good travel article. Only a little grammar error was found.
Do you think it's better:
We had been waiting for quite a long time before the waiter found a table for us.
This is the first time for me to read a travel actical in english, my english is very poor, but i am proving my english too, i will read more such these actical in future.
admiring of above DXs,
I will tell stoneriver MM as soon as possible,
I thought she would be excited much
wow, cardsilence's here!!!
“each full plate came empty quickly.“
i donot like such kind of eating .but every time the hikers do so just as the hungry beggars find delicious bread.
maybe a little gentle is better.