坚
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]我持剑而立
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]藐视天宇
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]你无须做出高贵的样子 隐藏
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]风来
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]雨来
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]乌云滚滚迩来
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]雷电劈我的身躯
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]呵呵 这又如何
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]即使你打烂我的身体
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]却打不断我的背脊
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]即使打断我的背脊
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]我的魂魄依然 屹立
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]而 我已碎成粉齑
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]声音却响彻天地
不 服
——图片为“和风情”转贴
湮灭
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]我穿越两千年的沧桑
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]前来探访
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]当年的战场
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]旌旗展动
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]战马悲鸣
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]空气中满是风雷之声
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]乌鸦
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]在头顶
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]贪婪的瞪着地上的血腥
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]而血 映残阳
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]当我的佩剑
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]与敌人的佩剑
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]同时刺穿对方的胸膛
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]我痛的是你啊
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp] [$nbsp]卿卿 此后长夜
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp] 断续的寒砧里
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]谁会怜你如雨
图为“和风清”转贴
我来践一个千年前的誓言
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]送别的人群中
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]有一双泪眼
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]当琴声缓缓的自身后响起
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]我知道
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]那是你跟我预约千年
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]雄关漫道 满眼黄土
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]而今我的魂魄穿越千年
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]却遍寻不见你的容颜
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]是我来的太早
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]亦或太晚
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]难道穿越千年后
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]再次与你
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]擦肩
同图，又一首。
这首较好，比较合题
日
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]宇宙 洪荒
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]谁能将我阻挡
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]天地混沌又如何
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]只要我一声大喝
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]云开
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]阳光普照
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]万里山河
图为“红星”摄
朝起看晨雾
你御风迩来
高居于秋天明净的天空
疑惑是山岚朝起的晨雾
一伸手
撩起的却是一把
风云暗涌
图为“苦楝树”摄
音符
四月的风
让你踏出一串逶迤的音符
而我们各揣心事
不经意 与这个季节的节拍
暗合
图为“苦楝树”摄
踏雪MM还挺有诗情画意。。。。。。
踏雪MM还挺有诗情画意。。。。。。
关山月
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]更转星稀逝流年
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]风霜几度
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]塞外秋寒
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]感怀不是旧时月
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]万里长城
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]无限关山
图为“桃叶渡”摄
改作"长城万里".与上阕"风霜几度"作结构呼应,与同阕中的下一句作平仄转换,会否好些?失敬.
谢谢生铁指教。
诗情画意
不仅内容而且连文字的颜色都和图片相衬，好才气！
不敢承受此赞，我是怀着诚惶诚恐的心理发这些帖子的。实在是你们拍的太好，我太喜欢，就忍不住涂鸦，你们不责怪我弄坏了你们的图片，我已经很感谢了。
但我会把你的表扬当成我努力的方向，呵呵。
舞
舞之千年
舞断绿腰
有谁能解意
一曲箜篌之后
染红天边云彩的
那不是夕阳
是我的绝望
图为“流浪猫猫”摄
高产女诗人，令人敬仰
不敢当。这个论坛里藏龙卧虎，我整理这些文字，一方面是免得太散，另一方面是抛砖引玉。同时做好了挨砖的准备。
才女！
支持一下。
怎的才女这般多，唯独我只能做个看客。。。
看了“独行侠”的摄影和“踏雪”的诗，真是感到这里人才了得，两字：PFPF
好诗好图！！
孤芳
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]我是游离春天之外
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]独自开放的花朵
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]在寂寞中
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]轻轻唱着歌
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]静静地 等待你
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp] 前来认领
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp] 前生的预约
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]我知道
[$nbsp] [$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]你将在秋天踏进山林
[$nbsp] [$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]从一条我不知道的小路
[$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]一步一步
[$nbsp] [$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]在无数个山涧背后
[$nbsp] [$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]石径一隅
[$nbsp] [$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp][$nbsp]寻找今生的承诺
图为“特立独行的猪”摄
好文才！好图片！
妹妹你哪混的
不错！
难怪说女人是水。
好啊！
嘿嘿
8错8错
很不错，让画面更生动